literature

I just want to tell you

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Literature Text

I just want to tell you
how much I love you
but my words
are insufficient

to construct an image
of the love I feel
each and every time
I see your face...

my heart just stops,
it misses a beat,
and my stomach
gets tied in knots.

I need to hold you
securely, in my arms
to fulfil my heartfelt desire
but you are far away my love

in a land across the sea
and I look upon
your image love,
and hope you remember me.
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Spectrumchaser's avatar
I like the way that you went through the whole piece without rhyming, but then had the last stanza rhyme. It gave the ending a punch and movement that was very nice and unexpected. :nod: